sábado, 15 de enero de 2011

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3 comentarios:

  1. No use of Spanish in your blogs!!!!

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  2. About Around the World (H/W)

    Dear Patricia,

    I think you're idea is 'ok', but there are some things to be corrected in your H/W:

    - Some grammar mistakes
    - Simple writing mistakes
    - One idea, one paragraph
    - Capital letters

    The use of a computer (for writing something) does'nt mean you may write without grammar rules or with mistakes. It is not a rough draft!

    Writing in internet means that lots of people may read you, so please write corrrectly!

    You have all weekend to write the information.

    I will visit again your blog for further corrections and mark punctuation.

    If you have any doubt please ask me in the general science blog, left column HOW TO: ABOUT H/W (around the world)

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  3. Patricia,

    good images, but there were more images and vocab terms than those three you have done! Please add vocabulary definitions!!! It will help you to study!

    you can look in Sandra's or María's blogs for some help:
    http://marianuno1998.blogspot.com/
    http://sandrasocialscience.blogspot.com/

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